Sunday, October 26, 2014

C4K Summary for October

Blogging Kids


Gabriel 6th Grade's blog

In Gabriel's post on Play Makers he wrote about “the championship game” between the Rockwell Rams and Darpy bears. He was asked to answer a few questions. How did the author end the story? Was that a good way to end the story? He goes on to tell about the game and the rivalry of two boys, Ben McBain and Chase Braggs. Gabriel said it was a good way to end the story because he would have never expected the Ram's to be knocked out of the playoff's. He ended his post saying, “Finally, that was a great way to show readers that you don’t have to win, to have the true heart of a champion and to show you that winning isn’t everything”. Over all it was such a good post of his response to this book.



Lexi- Mrs. Ripp's Class Blog

Although it has grammatical errors, it was too adorable not to share.

"My grandparents are AWESOME they are wonderful people and i love them sooooo much there kind, sweet, gentle, and calm. NO cause the older I get the sooner i get to see my BEST FRIEND his name is JESUS. In the Bible it says that you used to be able to live until you were 1000 even but God said that was to long to see his children and so he decided we could live up to 120 years old.     And he loves us sooo much.  I think in the book “The fourteenth goldfish”  that the grandpa is going to sleep over and that the might  steel something in the house cause he has to talk to the police  officers cause he was naughty.  What do you think is going to happen in the book?  Why don’t you read along with us? Can you spread the word of God around to 10 people? Are you a believer?  Did you know god loves you??"

I politely told her to watch out for errors, but she wrote such a good post. It was very comical to read. It made my whole day getting to read Lexi's post.


Kaiya's Blog

In Kaiya's blog post she simply was introducing herself, and telling a little bit about her family. She is eight years old, has three sisters, and one foster brother. She is an animal lover. She has three dogs, Elsa, Emma, and another one she did not name. She also has fish, three cats, and horses. Kaiya goes on to say that she has a big messy house, but she loves her house. It was a good get to know her post.

Melaia's Blog

Melaia wrote her blog post about a sunhat. She wears a sunhat when it is a hot day outside, or when they go to the beach. It helps keep your skin dry, and also protects from sunburn, she explains. Melaia ends with if you wear no hat you will get in trouble from your mum or dad, but if we wear a hat you will not get burnt from the sun. She had a few grammatical errors I nicely pointed out. I also told her that her post was very informative because I love the beach, and I love my sunhat.

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